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Trudy

Trudy


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PostSubject: My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production   My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production Icon_minitimeMon Aug 13, 2007 9:15 am

MY OTHER HALF



Dis is my 1st storie on dis board



Christopher Maurice Wilson and Christian Marques Brown are born two minutes apart. They got separated at birth after they're mom got to hold them for the 1st time. Then they were taken away to the Nursery room. When feeding time came around, only Christian came back with the Nurse. The parents of Christopher and Christian were devasted and were in search for their son, for a long time and sued the hospital.

Christopher was living with a couple who lives in the ghetto. His "mom" Mariah. Wasn’t able to have kids after she performed her own abortion at the age of 16. It gave her and his "dad" Jeffery to do what they did but they wanted a son, and the adoption agency wasn't letting a man with a bad criminal record take care of a child. It was hard trying to keep a baby that belongs to folks as rich as Chris' parents. The cops were all over searching and searching.

While Christian was living with his real parents. He was spoiled rotten, but his attitude was respectful. His mother thought him everything that a woman can teach their son about women. Christian also went to all of the finest schools known. He was a goody two shoes always.

One day they get switched up and Christopher meets his real parents and Christians girlfriend who's watching him doubting that he’s Christian. And Christian gets stuck with Christopher’s girlfriend and is acting too good to be Christopher.

They end up switching lives now follow the journey



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PostSubject: Re: My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production   My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production Icon_minitimeTue Aug 14, 2007 12:10 am

WOW! You got my attention!!, Heh.

And daaaaaaaamn, Performing your own abortion??? That shit must've hurt! Hahah...She must've really ain't want a child at that moment (Nor her folks finding out, lol!), I guess your parents whipping your ass was far worse than a do-it-yourself abortion, LMAO!

Excuse my foul mouth (Heheh.) But yeah, this got my attention. Run iiT!

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thnx Very Happy
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You welcome Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production   My other haLF A [[D4l]] Production Icon_minitimeWed Aug 15, 2007 9:34 am

Christopher Maurice
Wilson

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Over used phrase: Fuck you looking at?

You always know that it’s Christopher when he says that. He’s been using it since he learned how to talk. You'd never believe what his 1st word was.

“Why every time I came home I ain't got shit to eat in this house." Jeffery yelled and started throwing things around.

Mariah was standing near the front door with 1 1/2 year old Chris in her hands. She flinched when Jeffery started yelling. She put Chris down in the couch and rushed into the kitchen in an attempt to calm Jeffery down; she didn't want Chris to be exposed to this type of behavior every day.

After making whatever she could find in the little apartment, Mariah gave Jeffery something she could find.

“I don't want this shit, fuck is wrong with you." Jeffery smacked the plate out of Mariah hand.

Chris started to giggle.

" Fwck."

The sound of the word shocked both Mariah and Jeffery.

“What did he just say?" Jeffery said and walked over to Chris who was sitting in the couch, touching his feet. Jeffery was down on his knees in front of Chris eye to eye.

“What did you just say?"

Chris sat there looking at Jeffery for a while. He grinned with his two teeth showing.

"Fwck"

This time he pointed to Jeffery.

“See what you did." Mariah rushed over to Chris and picked him up and put his head on her shoulder.

“What I did? bitch if you made something, this would have never happened."

He got off the floor and walked into the kitchen to make himself something.

Bad Idea

Mariah was sitting in the principal’s office at PS 48. Listening to the list of things that Chris did the following day to his teacher and students.

“Is this true Christopher?" Mariah asked

Chris was sitting in the chair next to her with his arms folded with a frown on his face. Mariah was getting angrier when he wasn't answering her after she asked him several more times.

“Thank you for letting me know Mr. Morgan"

They shook hands and Mariah lead Chris out of the building by his left ear.

At home Mariah told Chris to go to his room, he got a 5 day suspension for hitting his teacher with a chair and fighting with a few boys who he claimed was 'picking on him.'

This wasn't the 1st time Chris did something like this. And it sure wasn't the last. Jeffery was out hustling again trying to get money to put Mariah and Chris in a new home instead of the very small one they have.

The next day, Chris was walking around the neighborhood hanging with the older crowd.

“Touch it." Kareem said to Chris while holding his gun out to him.

Chris touched the gun with the tip of his finger and pulled back.

Kareem was like an older brother to Chris.

Kareem laughed. "Its not going to do nothing to you, just hold it like this."

He put the gun in Chris' little hands and helped him aim around.

“What the hell are you doing? Don’t give that to him." Jeffery yelled and started charging at Kareem.

“Chill out man, it ain't even loaded." Kareem laughed and so did his crew.

Jeffery got mad and grabbed Chris and basically dragged him inside.

“Mariah, you see this shit? I can't even leave him around yo dirty ass no more." He yelled and walked into his and Mariah's room leaving Chris standing at the door. Chris could hear the sound of Jeffery's hands hitting Mariah.

“So what, he ain't my kid. I'mma report your ass."

“Bitch you ain't going to do shit, so stop playing before I get real serious. You the one who wanted to keep his lil rich ass away from his parents. When the cops come they gon' take yo ass."

“You the one who took him, I said I wanted a kid and you brought him home." Jeffery started hitting Mariah.

Chris was just standing at the door listening. All he heard was mumbling and hits and yelling. He couldn't make out what they were saying. But he knew that Mariah didn't care about him.

I don't like her either, He thought to himself.

Jeffery came back to where Chris was.

" You just gonna stand there all day? Get your little ass in here. I'm gon' have to discipline you, teach you not to be hanging around people that ain't your age."

Chris started walking slowly, which was getting Jeffery very inpatient

“Hurry, your little ass up before I do it right here.”

Chris started walking fast into, the little cramped space that’s his room. Jeffery took off his belt.

“Now you gon’ learn from this.” He raised his hand with the thick black pleather belt.



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